SCENE: IT HAD TO BE YOU

INT. LILY’S OFFICE - DAY

The room is dimly lit, still cold, it feels muted.

NO SOUND – JUST THE FOUNTAIN PEN SCRATCHING.

WILLIAM sits at a desk facing the window.

Curtains drift gently in the breeze.

We see only his silhouette — backlit by a pale, bright sky.

The light outlines his stillness, but the grief is unmistakable.

The camera focuses on the fountain pen in his hand, moving slowly and deliberately across the paper.

The sound of the nib scratching against the paper is rhythmic, almost hypnotic.

CLOSE-UP: HIS HANDS

His fingers tremble slightly as he writes.

The pen’s engraved words, “IT HAD TO BE YOU,” catch the light.

OVERHEAD SHOT:

Scattered pages.

His handwriting everywhere — neat but trembling.

Ink slightly smudged, like he paused too long.

Like the memories stalled him.

CLOSE-UP — HIS FACE

WILLIAM pauses, his head lowering slightly.

His shoulders rise and fall in a deep, unsteady breath.

He brings the pen closer to his face.

Gently touching the engraving with his thumb.

Then—

CLOSE-UP – FOUNTAIN PEN

The metal tip hovers — just about to touch the page.

SMASH CUT TO:

CLOSE-UP – VINYL NEEDLE

Dropping onto the record with a gentle crackle.

FLASHBACK – INT. LILY’S LIVING ROOM, NYC – NIGHT

Warm, flickering candlelight.

WILLIAM sits on the couch — still, present.

Across the room, LILY adjusts the turntable.

The needle finds its groove.

A breath.

Then: Sinatra’s “It Had to Be You” begins to play.

Timeless. Inevitable.

WIDE SHOT —

She crosses to him, a softness in her eyes.

The music swells — memory turning alive.

LILY
(smiling)
I found a song for us.

She walks over and grabs his hand, tugging him to his feet.

LILY
Come on.

CLOSE-UP – WILLIAM, slightly startled.

There’s hesitation in his eyes—almost like he’s never been pulled into a moment like this before.

But then… a soft laugh.

He lets her lead him.

They move to the center of the room.

LILY wraps her arms around him.

WILLIAM follows, slowly.

They begin to sway—gentle, unhurried.

Like the world has faded and left only the two of them.

LILY rests her head on his chest, her eyes closed, a contented smile on her lips.

CAMERA SPINNING AROUND THEM SLOWLY

LYRIC: "It had to be you, I wandered around and finally found somebody who made me be true"

CLOSE-UP: LILY’S FACE

Eyes closed, then slowly opening.

She looks up at him.

Tears shimmer — but don’t fall.

She doesn’t speak.

She just looks at him —

like she’s telling him everything.

Her gaze says: It had to be you.

WILLIAM

His eyes widen slightly as if her unspoken declaration has struck him like a thunderbolt.

CLOSE-UP – HER EYES ON HIM

Soft smile.

Unwavering gaze.

No fear. No doubt.

CAMERA KEEPS SPINNING AROUND THEM

LYRIC: "With all your faults, I love you still."

WILLIAM

His breath catches.

His lips parting in disbelief.

He looks at her as though he can’t believe she is opening her heart to him so completely.

His eyes close.

His brow furrows, overwhelmed.

He leans his forehead to hers.

Their breath mingles in silence.

WILLIAM
(soft, cracked whisper)
I love you too.

CLOSE-UP — THEIR FOREHEADS TOGETHER

His words feel like a vow.

Like they’ve been waiting to be spoken for an eternity.

He kisses her.

Slow.

Intentional.

Everything in him is in that kiss.

He pulls her closer, like she’s already fading and he refuses to let go.

As the camera circles behind WILLIAM, his figure briefly obscures LILY.

For just a moment, the screen is filled with his back.

His shoulders tense but holding her so carefully.

TRANSITION (SEAMLESS):

As the camera continues its arc, the warm golden light is gone.

The room is darker, colder.

The soundtrack shifts—the once-vivid tones of the song begin to sound hollow, distant, as if echoing in an empty space.

When the camera emerges from behind WILLIAM — LILY is gone.

William is alone. In their living room now.

The music lingers faintly, haunting and melancholic.

The room is now cast in muted grays and browns

A stark contrast to the warmth of before.

CAMERA MOVEMENT CONTINUES:

The camera keeps spinning around William, but its pace is slightly slower now, matching William’s movements.

He stands in the middle of the room.

Swaying slightly.

His arms folded around himself as if still holding her memory.

LYRIC CONTINUES, DISTANT AND ECHOING

"It had to be you…"

William sways slightly.

Lost in the memory of their dance.

His face crumples.

The tears he’s been holding back finally fall.

CLOSE-UP — HIS FACE

His eyes are red.

His expression raw and broken.

He hugs himself tighter, as though trying to fill the emptiness where she once was.

He sinks to his knees.

His body shaking with silent sobs.

The song continues to play.

A cruel reminder of what he’s lost.

INT. ROOM - DAY - PRESENT

WILLIAM at his desk, staring at the pen in his hand.

“IT HAD TO BE YOU” engraved.

It gleams faintly — like a scar.

He presses the pen to the paper again.

His tears smudging the ink as he writes.

CLOSE-UP: THE WORDS ON THE PAGE

The final words he writes:

"It had to be you. It always had to be you."

He sets the pen down carefully, almost reverently.

He exhales.

A long, quiet breath — like something just let go.

Not all of it.

But enough.

The room is silent except for his soft breathing.

ZOOM OUT.

SCENE: WAKE UP

INT. BEDROOM – GOLDEN MORNING

Warm, golden light floods the room — a dreamy glow.

Everything is soft.

Floating.

PROFILE SHOT – WILLIAM

He lies flat on his back, head resting on a pillow.

The sunlight spills behind him, casting halos around his silhouette.

SILENCE.

Then—

From the far side of the bed —

LILY gently turns and rolls onto him.

The motion is fluid, like weightless choreography.

She lands chest to chest —

her face just inches from his.

CLOSE-UP – SIDE PROFILE, PORTRAIT FRAMING

They fill the frame like a painting.

Golden light between them.

Their breath mingling in the quiet.

WILLIAM
(soft, disbelieving)
You’re here...

LILY
(gently, with a smile)
I’m always here, you know that.

She brushes her hand over his hair.

He closes his eyes for a second, overwhelmed.

WILLIAM
(touching her hair,
voice thick with emotion)
I’m trying...
(beat)
But it’s so hard without you.

LILY
(whispers, smiling gently)
It’s time to wake up, love.

She kisses his lips — barely there.

A breath.

SMASH CUT TO:

INT. WILLIAM’S BEDROOM – EARLY MORNING

TOP SHOT – WILLIAM

He lies alone.

Orange sunlight just beginning to stretch across the sheets.

The light is colder. Real. Present.

His body turned slightly to the left.

His left hand grips something gently:

Lily’s scarf.

Right where she had appeared.

Right where she had been — just moments before.

He exhales slowly.

CLOSE-UP – WILLIAM’S FACE

His expression is unreadable —

a mix of grief and wonder.

He touches his lips softly. Eyes still closed.

Like he’s trying to hold on.

But he already knows.

She’s gone.

But…

Not really.

WIDE SHOT – WILLIAM

He lies there, holding her scarf.

Still breathing her in.

A moment.

Then he sits up.

INT. LIVING ROOM – CONTINUOUS

William walks slowly toward the living room.

He pauses.

His breath catches.

Sunlight streams through the window —

a single beam catching on something small.

Eyes on the shimmer.

The light fractures —

golden shards flickering across the piano

The fragments drift —

Over the table.

Across the untouched pages she wrote.

A memory waiting.

He follows it.

He turns around to look for the source of reflection.

Camera moves slightly.

CLOSE UP - Lily’s engagement ring,

Reflecting the morning light hitting it perfectly.

He sits at the piano.

Fingers hover above the keys.

The reflection touching his hands.

Gentle smile.

He plays — soft, fragile notes.

But the light shifts slowly —

Now landing fully on the pages.

He stops.

Stares.

CLOSE-UP – THE COVER:


“ECHOES”


The light catches the title.

Like it’s been waiting.

He walks toward it.

Slowly.

His breath shallow.

Eyes locked on the title.

CLOSE-UP – WILLIAM’S FACE

Tension in his jaw.

His eyes flicker with something between longing and dread.

He stops a few feet away.

He doesn’t reach for it.

Not yet.

He looks away.

To the window.

To anywhere else.

The weight of the moment is too much.

SILENCE.

He paces.

A step forward.

A step back.

His hand runs through his hair.

He exhales, hard — like forcing something out of his chest.

CAMERA MOVES WITH HIM

He stops.

Looks back at the script.

A long stare.

CLOSE-UP – HIS HANDS

Trembling.

Hovering above the cover.

He doesn’t open it.

He lifts it.

A breath.

He knows it’s time to read it.

Piece of her.

He opens the first page.

SFX: City hum fades.

Silence.

QUICK CUTS:

CLOSE-UP – William’s face.

Focused.

Curious.

His hand gripping the pages tighter.

His breath shallows.

His expression changes

— confusion

- recognition

- panic

CLOSE-UP – SCRIPT:

“violet flower”

GLIMPSE – DREAM:

A violet lies in a dark mud. Lonely. Haunting.

CLOSE-UP – SCRIPT:

“black horse”

GLIMPSE – DREAM:

HOOVES pounding. Fog. Black horse breaks through the frame.

CLOSE-UP ON WILLIAM’S FACE:

He stares at the page.
His breath heavy, every line of the script like a slap to his soul.

CLOSE-UP – SCRIPT:

“white rose”

“daisy flower”

“lily blooms”

GLIMPSES – QUICK, STAGGERED:

White rose scattered in black void.

Daisy on stack of papers, bleeding at its core.

A lily blooming in light.

CLOSE-UP – WILLIAM

His eyes widen. He pales.

But he can’t stop reading.

He flips faster now — searching.

WILLIAM
(whispers)
No... No, no... this isn’t possible.

WIDE SHOT – WILLIAM

He stumbles back.

Breathing hard.

Tears welling.

Panic rising.

WILLIAM
(broken)
Lily… how did you—?

He drops to his knees.

CLOSE-UP ON WILLIAM’S FACE:

Tears fall down his face.

His eyes wide with disbelief.

His mouth moves, but he can’t speak.

His entire body trembles, as though the weight of the world is pressing down on him.

SLOW ZOOM OUT

The weight of it crashes into him.

His breath shakes.

His hands won’t stop trembling.

And the silence presses in.

The camera slowly pulls back from him.

The room quiet except for his ragged breathing.

[published 9/7/2025]
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